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The Swampling King The Windwalker Legacy Book 1 eBook Ben S Dobson

It's an amazing concept and storyline with a lot of promise but the character interaction and development is really lacking. This is the second book of Mr. Dobson's that I've read and he is really creative with his stories. The character interactions though sound like 12 year old kids talking to each other. Critical story points are solved by key leaders asking "what do you want me to do? ok i'll go do that," rather than genuine conversations, actions, or leadership. Overly simplistic. Again, great story ideas, just poor character development. I didn't struggle with the introduction of new characters as others have stated. There is needless introduction and development of characters that are only part of 3 page scenarios. Instead of stating the guard led our hero down the hall for example, it would instead read guard Ben Dobson who has been part of the prison chain gang since he was 12 during the kings reign, seemed to have forgotten his morning eggs which princess buttercup diligently collected on their behalf knowing his diet required gluton free, free range swampnuts. He had a slight limp as he walked our hero to his cage because of a duck scratch under his right thumb, acquired from a kickball game at age 17....and then we never see this character again...


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The Swampling King The Windwalker Legacy Book 1 eBook Ben S Dobson Reviews

I read another book of his (The flaw in magic) and wanted to read more because of the good writtng. I don't know what happened but this book is of a much lower quality. I only made it a third of the way though and had to stop. I was flicking though so much filler dialog to get to the story that I lost interrest. I tried to pretend the characters motivations were valid but after adding more illogical characters I quit. It's like he forgot the story and started anew every once in awhile and added characters to try and make in better and failed. One review said i t gets better later on in the story, I couldn't make it that far. Don't judge the author by this book.
This book kept my attention and was a good page turner, but it was really, really, really long. The main characters (Zerill and Josen) are well done and very deep, but I could have used a bit more back story on both. The world building was pretty imaginative, but there are a lot of missing holes (where did Zerill's people come from? Why are they so different in appearance to Josen's people?). There is some history about powerful Windwalker ancestors but it would have been nice to have more background on them too. The last Windwalker has arrived...and he is a bit anticlimatic too. He is a boy and he doesn't do too much impressive in the novel other than talk to birds. Hopefully he will develop some powers in a future book. At the end of the novel Josen is indeed on his way to become Swamping King but he spends a lot of the book not being much of a leader. Perhaps that was part of the point, but he does seem at times a bit undeserving of his destiny. The best leader in the book turns out to be the main villain of the story. Overall, the story is fairly good but I can't make much judgement on the overall series without reading more books to see where this going to go.

NOTE I received this book for free in exchange for an honest review.
The story immersed me from start to finish. It had some expected turns as well as some unexpected turns. I liked that there was dual heroines and I appreciated the theme of overcoming prejudices. The Swapling King had goes without being gory, it had thrills and action scenes and good character development. It was a story that was easy to follow and I cheered for the main character from beginning to end. I fully recommend it.
I could not put this book down. Exceptional character development and an amazing world that is easy to get immersed in. Can hardly wait for the next entry in this series. Definitely a fan for life.
Good book! Flow was smooth. Ending makes you want to read more. I will definitely be getting sequel. That's it.
Great read. It could almost be compared to game of thrones. Really enjoyed reading. Highly recommend to anyone who enjoys intrique and bravery
The first time I've been so sucked in to a book since I discovered Brandon Sanderson. Complex plot and characters. They actually have depth!!! I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys a good fantasy epic with well thought out characters. I can't wait for the next book.
It's an amazing concept and storyline with a lot of promise but the character interaction and development is really lacking. This is the second book of Mr. Dobson's that I've read and he is really creative with his stories. The character interactions though sound like 12 year old kids talking to each other. Critical story points are solved by key leaders asking "what do you want me to do? ok i'll go do that," rather than genuine conversations, actions, or leadership. Overly simplistic. Again, great story ideas, just poor character development. I didn't struggle with the introduction of new characters as others have stated. There is needless introduction and development of characters that are only part of 3 page scenarios. Instead of stating the guard led our hero down the hall for example, it would instead read guard Ben Dobson who has been part of the prison chain gang since he was 12 during the kings reign, seemed to have forgotten his morning eggs which princess buttercup diligently collected on their behalf knowing his diet required gluton free, free range swampnuts. He had a slight limp as he walked our hero to his cage because of a duck scratch under his right thumb, acquired from a kickball game at age 17....and then we never see this character again...